Family Visitation (Ten Minute)

by Paul Donnelly

A young man's final visit with his dying lover does not go quite as he expected.

A young man's final visit with his dying lover does not go quite as he expected.

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Family Visitation (Ten Minute)

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  • Maggie Smith: Family Visitation (Ten Minute)

    It is astounding how much a person can say in twelve pages. “Family Visitation” shows us the people affected by of one of the darkest eras of queer history. What is truly heartbreaking is the way love is depicted in this play— With Randy’s true love being forced to stay hidden in the hallway, while his lover’s family’s superficial love gets to be put on displace in order to maintain appearances. The final moment of the play, depicting Estelle with the teddy bear, reminds us just how much louder actions speak than words. Beautifully done, Paul.

    It is astounding how much a person can say in twelve pages. “Family Visitation” shows us the people affected by of one of the darkest eras of queer history. What is truly heartbreaking is the way love is depicted in this play— With Randy’s true love being forced to stay hidden in the hallway, while his lover’s family’s superficial love gets to be put on displace in order to maintain appearances. The final moment of the play, depicting Estelle with the teddy bear, reminds us just how much louder actions speak than words. Beautifully done, Paul.

  • Ian Donley: Family Visitation (Ten Minute)

    "Family Visitation" is a punch to the gut (and a good history lesson for those who have yet to learn their queer history). The conflict between these two characters is subtle yet has a strong impact, making this piece an uncomfortable experience in the best way possible.

    "Family Visitation" is a punch to the gut (and a good history lesson for those who have yet to learn their queer history). The conflict between these two characters is subtle yet has a strong impact, making this piece an uncomfortable experience in the best way possible.

  • Susan Middaugh: Family Visitation (Ten Minute)

    A play with simple props, easy to stage, and which offers tremendous impact. There is inherent conflict in the situation between a dictatorial nurse and the patient's male lover who wants to visit him one last time. What a commentary! It hits us over the head not by blunt force but with a stuffed animal and a biohazard waste can. Economical and efficient dialogue. Bravo, Paul!

    A play with simple props, easy to stage, and which offers tremendous impact. There is inherent conflict in the situation between a dictatorial nurse and the patient's male lover who wants to visit him one last time. What a commentary! It hits us over the head not by blunt force but with a stuffed animal and a biohazard waste can. Economical and efficient dialogue. Bravo, Paul!

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Character Information


  • Randy Benton
    Working class. Preparing to let go of his dying lover.
    Character Age
    mid-20's
    Character Race/Ethnic Identity
    Any
    Character Gender Identity
    Male,
    Cisgender Male
  • Estelle Miller
    A conscientious nurse and good Christian. She makes a real effort not to let her beliefs affect the care she provides.
    Character Age
    Middle aged
    Character Race/Ethnic Identity
    Any
    Character Gender Identity
    Female,
    Cisgender Female

Production History

  • Type University, Organization West Texas A&M University, Year 2023
  • Type High School, Organization Bergen County Academies, Year 2022
  • Type University, Organization White Mouse Productions, Year 2022
  • Type Community Theater, Organization Theatre Odyssey, Year 2019