Neat.

by Eryn Elyse McVay

FULL-LENGTH Rowan and Alex come together 8 months post-breakup and rehash old wounds. Where is the line between what feels good and what is good?

CW: substance abuse, relationship manipulation, suicide

NAMES OF CHARACTERS HAVE ALTERED. PREVIOUS RECOMMENDATIONS MAY NOT REFLECT THE MOST CURRENT DRAFTS' CAST OF CHARACTERS

FULL-LENGTH Rowan and Alex come together 8 months post-breakup and rehash old wounds. Where is the line between what feels good and what is good?

CW: substance abuse, relationship manipulation, suicide

NAMES OF CHARACTERS HAVE ALTERED. PREVIOUS RECOMMENDATIONS MAY NOT REFLECT THE MOST CURRENT DRAFTS' CAST OF CHARACTERS

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Neat.

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  • David L. Williams: Neat.

    A play that is constantly moving forward while showing how a difficult relationship can pull us back to the path. I appreciate how the playwright is able to take the trappings of a romantic comedy (a comedy of "remarriage") and put them up to the light, examining the the often-unseen toxic elements of those tropes. The playwright has a poetic naturalism to her dialogue, and is able with brief, seemingly tossed-aside comments, to give depths of insight into her characters.

    A play that is constantly moving forward while showing how a difficult relationship can pull us back to the path. I appreciate how the playwright is able to take the trappings of a romantic comedy (a comedy of "remarriage") and put them up to the light, examining the the often-unseen toxic elements of those tropes. The playwright has a poetic naturalism to her dialogue, and is able with brief, seemingly tossed-aside comments, to give depths of insight into her characters.

  • Aaron Allen Ussery: Neat.

    This play is such a wonderful depiction of a dysfunctional relationship, because half the time we can't even really pinpoint the dysfunction. McVay weaves an excellent array of insights within the dialogue and stage directions that show us the surface appeal of Rowan and Alex's relationship, while allowing plenty of room for the darker undercurrents that let us know things are just ... not quite right.

    This play is such a wonderful depiction of a dysfunctional relationship, because half the time we can't even really pinpoint the dysfunction. McVay weaves an excellent array of insights within the dialogue and stage directions that show us the surface appeal of Rowan and Alex's relationship, while allowing plenty of room for the darker undercurrents that let us know things are just ... not quite right.

  • Nick Malakhow: Neat.

    In this piece, McVay has crafted an incredibly compelling portrait of the scars that toxic and unhealthy relationships can leave us with. Rowan and Alex's history unfolds in funny and human dialogue that beautifully captures the irregularities of natural speech. By the end of the piece, we understand exactly why they self destructed in the past as well as who they are in the present. The ending is poignant, sad, and yet also looking towards the future. I look forward to seeing where this piece goes next!

    In this piece, McVay has crafted an incredibly compelling portrait of the scars that toxic and unhealthy relationships can leave us with. Rowan and Alex's history unfolds in funny and human dialogue that beautifully captures the irregularities of natural speech. By the end of the piece, we understand exactly why they self destructed in the past as well as who they are in the present. The ending is poignant, sad, and yet also looking towards the future. I look forward to seeing where this piece goes next!

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Character Information

Liz and Neighbor are doubled
  • Rowan
    Character Age
    Mid-20s
    Character Gender Identity
    woman
  • Alex
    Character Age
    Mid-20s
    Character Gender Identity
    woman
  • Liz
    Doubled with Neighbor. Since the Neighbor is never seen, it is fine that actor playing Liz/Neighbor be in their 20s-30s. It is more important that the actor playing Liz/Neighbor to be Liz's correct age.
    Character Age
    Mid-20s
    Character Gender Identity
    woman
  • Neighbor
    Doubled with Liz. Since the Neighbor is never seen, it is fine that actor playing Liz/Neighbor be in their 20s-30s. It is more important that the actor playing Liz/Neighbor to be Liz's correct age.
    Character Age
    40s-60s

Development History

  • Type Reading, Organization Not So Staged Readings, Year 2020