The Loophole

When Darlene and Charlene Caddell accidentally overcharge the Department of Defense $10,000 for shipping a two-dollar lug nut, they discover a loophole that will eventually net them over twenty million dollars. What begins as grief-stricken Darlene's attempt to fund charity after her son's death spirals into luxury cars, ocean-front property, and matching Mercedes—while her husband David obsesses over his dead...

When Darlene and Charlene Caddell accidentally overcharge the Department of Defense $10,000 for shipping a two-dollar lug nut, they discover a loophole that will eventually net them over twenty million dollars. What begins as grief-stricken Darlene's attempt to fund charity after her son's death spirals into luxury cars, ocean-front property, and matching Mercedes—while her husband David obsesses over his dead son's rock-climbing mentor instead of noticing his wife's transformation from Sunday school teacher to white-collar criminal. Seven years later, as the twins face the consequences of their choices, David must journey into the New Mexico desert to confront an impossible question: how did he miss the signs of his wife's unraveling, and what role did his own refusal to truly grieve play in her descent? This darkly comic drama explores how ordinary people rationalize extraordinary crimes, and how the small moments we ignore can grow into forces that destroy everything we love.

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The Loophole

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  • Jordan Bird: The Loophole

    Aching and heartbreaking, full of beauty and truth: THE LOOPHOLE asks how much grief the human heart can bear before it transforms, for good or ill. Melding music, magic, poetry, and high stakes, Isom-Campbell's play is exciting theatre.

    Aching and heartbreaking, full of beauty and truth: THE LOOPHOLE asks how much grief the human heart can bear before it transforms, for good or ill. Melding music, magic, poetry, and high stakes, Isom-Campbell's play is exciting theatre.

  • Jordan Flores Schwartz: The Loophole

    Wounds & Honey is an incredibly rich and engaging script, exploring relationships and morality from several vantage points. These larger ideas are propelled by the poetic details of this family's story, with everything neatly connected. Isom Campbell's crystal clear writing and powerful visuals made this script an absolute joy to read and every scene absolutely jumped off the page. There is something in this script for everyone!

    Wounds & Honey is an incredibly rich and engaging script, exploring relationships and morality from several vantage points. These larger ideas are propelled by the poetic details of this family's story, with everything neatly connected. Isom Campbell's crystal clear writing and powerful visuals made this script an absolute joy to read and every scene absolutely jumped off the page. There is something in this script for everyone!

  • Jacob Juntunen: The Loophole

    I had the pleasure of seeing this play at the Great Plains Theatre Conference, and its beautiful handling of life and loss in a Southern, Baptist context was truly exceptional. It captured these lives with respect, and never portrayed their religion or region with caricature or exoticism. Instead, the play portrayed these characters' pain through poetic, theatrical imagery that has stayed with me. A must read.

    I had the pleasure of seeing this play at the Great Plains Theatre Conference, and its beautiful handling of life and loss in a Southern, Baptist context was truly exceptional. It captured these lives with respect, and never portrayed their religion or region with caricature or exoticism. Instead, the play portrayed these characters' pain through poetic, theatrical imagery that has stayed with me. A must read.

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Darlene – a middle-aged Baptist woman and former children’s church teacher. Except now that her only son is dead, she begins to reinvent herself into someone much darker.

Charlene – she’s slimmer and sleeker than her twin sister. She prides herself on her appearance. She’s very business-like, professional, put-together and takes care of (or perhaps controls) the people closest to her.
David – husband to Darlene, a plumber, who owns his own business and makes good money. He loves to talk to strangers, but he wasn’t the most comfortable father. He’s a good man, but perhaps he tries too hard to behave in an acceptable way.

Bill – husband to Charlene, an architect, who started his career late in life. He’s talented but not quite as driven as Charlene.

Brother George – a former rock climber, famous for free solo climbing (climbing without a rope), turned Benedictine Monk. He’s lost something of himself as a monk that he found in rock climbing.

Guitarist – a Spanish guitar player who underscores the magical moments in the play, as well as transitions and ambient noises. The music provided is integral to the tone of the play. However, if a guitarist is not possible, canned music could be used.

Development History

  • Type Workshop, Organization Barter Theatre, developmental mini-production, under the title Dough & Cookies, Year 2018
  • Type Reading, Organization The Barter Theatre's Festival of Appalachian Plays & Playwrights, Year 2017
  • Type Reading, Organization Great Plains Theatre Conference, Year 2017
  • Type Workshop, Organization Third Course: Theatre, Austin, Year 2016
  • Type Reading, Organization Third Course: Theatre, Austin, Year 2014

Production History

  • Type Professional, Organization Barter Theatre, Year 2019

Awards

  • The O’Neill Center’s National Playwrights Conference
    Semi-Finalist
    2018