Off Center

by Jacquelyn Floyd-Priskorn

Melody, a somewhat eccentric older woman, sits in front of her favorite painting at the art museum, a white dot painted slightly off center on a black background. It's closing time and the new security guard, Lindsay, needs for her to clear out, but before she leaves, Melody will give a lesson on life, art and living while you still can appreciate the beauty in life.
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Melody, a somewhat eccentric older woman, sits in front of her favorite painting at the art museum, a white dot painted slightly off center on a black background. It's closing time and the new security guard, Lindsay, needs for her to clear out, but before she leaves, Melody will give a lesson on life, art and living while you still can appreciate the beauty in life.
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  • Emmet L.F. Cameron: Off Center

    A well-constructed short that reminds the audience there is more context to every stranger whose behaviour may confuse or irritate you, whether you’re lucky enough to have their story rolled out for you in such a dramatically satisfactory way.

    A well-constructed short that reminds the audience there is more context to every stranger whose behaviour may confuse or irritate you, whether you’re lucky enough to have their story rolled out for you in such a dramatically satisfactory way.

  • Morey Norkin: Off Center

    Easily one of Jacquie Floyd-Priskorn’s best works, yet one not relying on her signature sense of humor. Rather it is infused with her sense of humanity, another hallmark of her writing. Like Marco the security guard, I think everyone will want to give Melody a hug. Lovely work deserving of all its success.

    Easily one of Jacquie Floyd-Priskorn’s best works, yet one not relying on her signature sense of humor. Rather it is infused with her sense of humanity, another hallmark of her writing. Like Marco the security guard, I think everyone will want to give Melody a hug. Lovely work deserving of all its success.

  • Claudia Haas: Off Center

    Filled with surprises, happy and poignant, this is a play that begs to be produced. The role of Melody is a gift to actresses and the guards who letdown their guard are flesh and bone and nuanced. Charming and sweet with the knowledge of what can be robbed from you for no reason at all. Abstract art. Abstract life.

    Filled with surprises, happy and poignant, this is a play that begs to be produced. The role of Melody is a gift to actresses and the guards who letdown their guard are flesh and bone and nuanced. Charming and sweet with the knowledge of what can be robbed from you for no reason at all. Abstract art. Abstract life.

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Development History

  • Type Reading, Organization Michigan Playwright's Festival, Theatre Nova, Ann Arbor, MI. , Year 2016
  • Type Reading, Organization Actor Showcase, Oakland University, Auburn Hills, MI., Year 2016
  • Type Reading, Organization Pass the Hat Promotions, Ann Arbor, MI., Year 2016

Production History

  • Type Professional, Organization Winding Road Theatre Ensemble 8x10s, Year 2023
  • Type Community Theater, Organization Orange Players, Orange, CT, Year 2022
  • Type Professional, Organization Gather by the Ghost Light (audio podcast), Year 2022
  • Type High School, Organization George Washington High School, Denver, CO., Year 2020
  • Type High School, Organization Berean Baptist Christian School, Rockford, IL, Year 2019
  • Type High School, Organization Napoleon High School Speech Team, Napoleon, OH., Year 2019
  • Type High School, Organization Pratt High School, Pratt, KS., Year 2019
  • Type High School, Organization Southern Lee High School, Sanford, NC., Year 2019
  • Type Professional, Organization CMAP, Detroit, MI. , Year 2017
  • Type Professional, Organization North Park Vaudeville and Candy Shoppe, San Diego, CA. , Year 2017
  • Type Professional, Organization Tipping Point Theatre's Sandbox Play Festival, Northville, MI., Year 2016

Awards

  • Best Play
    Oakland University
    Judges' Choice
    2016