What You Did Say

TEN MINUTE: George and Hal just broke up yesterday. Last night, in fact. It's still fresh. Fortunately, they've got people helping them process today, taking it moment by moment. Maybe they're not right for each other long term. Maybe things just ran their course. But as painful as it can be to speculate or re-litigate, there's still something lingering beneath the surface of this pair's ending...

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TEN MINUTE: George and Hal just broke up yesterday. Last night, in fact. It's still fresh. Fortunately, they've got people helping them process today, taking it moment by moment. Maybe they're not right for each other long term. Maybe things just ran their course. But as painful as it can be to speculate or re-litigate, there's still something lingering beneath the surface of this pair's ending...

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What You Did Say was published in the Summer 2025 Issue of River and South Review.

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  • Norm Reynolds: What You Did Say

    The structure and cast of "What You Did Say" grabs your attention. Where do you go after a break-up? To friends and therapists. Everyone in the play- the two "ex's" and their confidantes- has input here, sometimes in unison, and separately. The difficult start of processing of a break-up is the focal point of this believable and poignant play.

    The structure and cast of "What You Did Say" grabs your attention. Where do you go after a break-up? To friends and therapists. Everyone in the play- the two "ex's" and their confidantes- has input here, sometimes in unison, and separately. The difficult start of processing of a break-up is the focal point of this believable and poignant play.

  • Paul Donnelly: What You Did Say

    This is an urgent exploration of a relationship torn apart by unexpressed expectations. Juxtaposing their painful recollections enables a build to a moment of real clarity for each. George and Hal are compellingly drawn and the play gives full voice to their separate journeys. This is a skillfully crafted and thoroughly engaging work.

    This is an urgent exploration of a relationship torn apart by unexpressed expectations. Juxtaposing their painful recollections enables a build to a moment of real clarity for each. George and Hal are compellingly drawn and the play gives full voice to their separate journeys. This is a skillfully crafted and thoroughly engaging work.

  • Donald E. Baker: What You Did Say

    This little gem is a terrific example of how structure can serve and enhance content. George and Hal's relationship failed in large part because they couldn't communicate what they expected of one another. And Heyman doesn't allow them to do so here either. Instead, they simultaneously air their grievances, self-justifications, and misunderstandings to third parties on a split stage. Their dialogues overlap, interject, and conjoin in such a way as to grab the audience's attention and hold it to the end. It's a brilliant piece of work.

    This little gem is a terrific example of how structure can serve and enhance content. George and Hal's relationship failed in large part because they couldn't communicate what they expected of one another. And Heyman doesn't allow them to do so here either. Instead, they simultaneously air their grievances, self-justifications, and misunderstandings to third parties on a split stage. Their dialogues overlap, interject, and conjoin in such a way as to grab the audience's attention and hold it to the end. It's a brilliant piece of work.

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Development History

  • Type Reading, Organization Playwrights Thriving, Year 2023

Production History

  • Type Professional, Organization Winding Road Theater, Year 2026
  • Type Professional, Organization Boxland Media, Year 2025
  • Type Professional, Organization The EXIT Theatre, Year 2024