A Little Light

by Lee R. Lawing

Andrew is enjoying his newspaper on a park bench under a lamp light toward sunset. Betsy interrupts his calmness when she asks if she may share his bench as it is the best spot in the park to watch the sunsets. He begrudgingly gives into her request and their conversation sheds a little light on a past that Andrew had hoped to forget and Betsy struggled to put behind her.

Andrew is enjoying his newspaper on a park bench under a lamp light toward sunset. Betsy interrupts his calmness when she asks if she may share his bench as it is the best spot in the park to watch the sunsets. He begrudgingly gives into her request and their conversation sheds a little light on a past that Andrew had hoped to forget and Betsy struggled to put behind her.

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  • John Busser: A Little Light

    12.21.24 - What starts out as an innocuous meeting on a park bench turns into a nightmare for a man who made the other person's entire life a nightmare years earlier. Lee Lawing pulled the rug out from under me as surely as Betsy did to Andrew. And, in a fitting bit of karma, Andrew is the one who had this coming (after telling the police that she had wanted it back then). Revenge as sharp as a knitting needle.

    12.21.24 - What starts out as an innocuous meeting on a park bench turns into a nightmare for a man who made the other person's entire life a nightmare years earlier. Lee Lawing pulled the rug out from under me as surely as Betsy did to Andrew. And, in a fitting bit of karma, Andrew is the one who had this coming (after telling the police that she had wanted it back then). Revenge as sharp as a knitting needle.

  • Paul Donnelly: A Little Light

    A seemingly benign interaction on a park bench builds to a horrific revelation and a shocking act of retribution. The natural and engaging dialogue goes suddenly dark in the most skillful way. Betsy's final act and its motivation left me truly shaken.

    A seemingly benign interaction on a park bench builds to a horrific revelation and a shocking act of retribution. The natural and engaging dialogue goes suddenly dark in the most skillful way. Betsy's final act and its motivation left me truly shaken.

  • Kim E. Ruyle: A Little Light

    Lee Lawing lures us into what could be just another pedestrian park bench play, but the mystery about the relationship between the two seniors on the bench builds until… Bam! A shocking reveal and conclusion as the mystery is solved. Excellent!

    Lee Lawing lures us into what could be just another pedestrian park bench play, but the mystery about the relationship between the two seniors on the bench builds until… Bam! A shocking reveal and conclusion as the mystery is solved. Excellent!

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Character Information

  • Andrew
    Character Age
    60s
    Character Race/Ethnic Identity
    Any Race/Any Ethnicity
    Character Gender Identity
    Male
  • Besty
    Character Age
    60s
    Character Race/Ethnic Identity
    Any Race/Any Ethnicity
    Character Gender Identity
    woman