There are some big issues packed into a little play here: self-image, self-loathing, poor nutrition, the inability to connect and communicate between the generations/parent & child, how poverty restricts choice...
Perhaps there's scope to expand and explore in more depth? For example, it would be interesting to have more insight as to why the mother relents; has she given up or was it deliberate and therefore more sinister?
An interesting take on some important subjects with scope to develop further the characters; roles that actors can really get their teeth into.
There are some big issues packed into a little play here: self-image, self-loathing, poor nutrition, the inability to connect and communicate between the generations/parent & child, how poverty restricts choice...
Perhaps there's scope to expand and explore in more depth? For example, it would be interesting to have more insight as to why the mother relents; has she given up or was it deliberate and therefore more sinister?
An interesting take on some important subjects with scope to develop further the characters; roles that actors can really get their teeth into.