“ Arianna Rose, my hat's off to you. As someone who appreciates wordplay, I was totally taken by this piece. Sophisticated, and I think a lot harder to bring off that it seems reading it. With reading you are able to take a moment to ponder the context, see the spelling (important in a few passages here to the characters, not just the reader), and take your time to figure out where they're going. Onstage, the actors will have to really put effort to make sure this works. Not because it's confusing, but because it is devilishly clever. Very cool! ”

“ Kay's description of the orange and her immense craving for a slice are written so evocatively. Emily McClain paints such a wonderful picture with language alone, that the actors onstage performing would be like icing on a cake. Kay is almost paralyzed with self doubt, fear, and embarrassment over such a small thing as an orange slice. But we all sometimes blow things way out of proportion, don't we? As audience members we can look at Kay and say "Just ask for it, already!" But there's a possibility that if WE were Kay, we might be paralyzed too. ”

“ I laughed my assius off reading this hilarious piece from Morey Norkin. I would pay good money to see this produced (Are you listening, theaters? You've already sold one ticket for sure!) Packed with visual and written gags, this is the kind of thing an evening of short plays would put either first to start with a bang, or last to end with a blast! I can't recommend it enough.

"Cicero Lipschitz"! Morey, you killed me with that name! Brilliant! ”

“ I loved the juxtaposition of having such heavy material for a discussion wrapped in Star Wars costumery. The characters, despite their lack of amity toward each other, are united in their desire to keep the relationship going with their son, and are willing to work together to do so. Not a bad lesson for a lot of divorced parents to learn. And it's done with gentle charm and humor. Great job Paul! ”