Wow! This to me is a fascinating piece because I read it three separate times and understood the nuances differently every time. Jones writes with such finesse that the reader knows the absolutely necessary facts. But the rest is left to the imagination. Such a cool piece!

I don't think I'll be alone in saying that I had to read this twice and both times it read differently. A short play like this is supposed to be open-ended and Lou Jones creates a wonderful show that is full of mystery. You feel for Steven and wonder what is going on. Lou tells this story brilliantly and gives you just enough answers to shape your imagination into filling in the blanks. Wonderful show!

Amazing how such a powerful story can be told in one minute! Lou Jones lands an emotional punch with this well-crafted short!