Definitely a page-turner that will be even more dynamic on the stage. Terrific character development, dialogue that doesn't waste time, and ever increasing tension are the hallmarks of this suspense thriller. Lots of ground is covered in just 12 pages. Excellent work, Rachel Feeny-Williams. I'm looking forward to reading your other works.

Tension and conflict from the outset. Rachel keeps us guessing. Move over, Philip Marlowe.

What a superlative and suspenseful noir saga, full of twists and reveals and characters who are not what they seem. It also has an engaging whiff of comedy. And if there's a lesson to be learned, it's don't mess with Jacquie Floyd.