This monologue has everything a monologue should have, especially for an audition: high stakes (I believe the need for a massage to be high stakes, and it sounds like this stressed-out mom really needs it), a well-crafted character, and very funny description. It would surely break the monotony of high strung narratives involving grief or guilt. This woman knows what she wants and she gets it. Fantastic!
This monologue has everything a monologue should have, especially for an audition: high stakes (I believe the need for a massage to be high stakes, and it sounds like this stressed-out mom really needs it), a well-crafted character, and very funny description. It would surely break the monotony of high strung narratives involving grief or guilt. This woman knows what she wants and she gets it. Fantastic!