A tale of estranged brothers that tick-tick-ticks like a timebomb until it eventually explodes. I love how the brothers' dialogue covers ground from the mundane (chicken fingers) to more serious topics (the afterlife), and how it all reads very naturally, like words that people would actually speak to one another. I also love how these characters' wounds spill out onto the page. Awesome job.
A tale of estranged brothers that tick-tick-ticks like a timebomb until it eventually explodes. I love how the brothers' dialogue covers ground from the mundane (chicken fingers) to more serious topics (the afterlife), and how it all reads very naturally, like words that people would actually speak to one another. I also love how these characters' wounds spill out onto the page. Awesome job.