This is an intimate monologue. It's almost too much, except for Scott Sickles' skill.
Subtle choices by Sickles will pull in a reader, an audience: choice of protagonist, choice of protagonist action. Sickles also provides enough hints to backstory and history in "Fracture," but leaves some mystery behind just to make sure this monologue doesn't pass too easily.
There's just enough friction created by the mystery and additional intimacy in the direct language to make "Fracture" come alive while reading and no doubt come alive in performance.
This is an intimate monologue. It's almost too much, except for Scott Sickles' skill.
Subtle choices by Sickles will pull in a reader, an audience: choice of protagonist, choice of protagonist action. Sickles also provides enough hints to backstory and history in "Fracture," but leaves some mystery behind just to make sure this monologue doesn't pass too easily.
There's just enough friction created by the mystery and additional intimacy in the direct language to make "Fracture" come alive while reading and no doubt come alive in performance.