“ Is this mannequin played by an actor or is the mannequin given VO by actor? I love the possiblilty of a theatre of object, no human on stage. Delightful character voice with interesting backstory and a moment for change. ”

“ Hmmmm could smushed up brownie make you think it's dog pooh? I would love to see this play out with each character's reaction. And the ending, it's hilarous. We can relate to each character, yes even the awful one, that's what makes this comedy pawfect. ”

“ This is one of the most intense short plays I have read on NPX in a long time. It hits hard in so many ways and times during the reading, emotionally and politically. And the surprises, the truth revealed about the characters and their position in the world, who they really are in perspective on gun violence -- effective. And the use of chorus will only make this more powerful. Should be produced everywhere part of our protest against politicians who don't do anything about gun violence and don't care. ”

“ Falloween is joyous. The experience of joy is rare on stage, I think. The descriptive power of this monologue is its sensory overload for the reader. The smells, mm, the sights, aw. Audience will be charmed by this. ”