It's so hard to put a complete story into just a short monologue. Beginning, middle, end. Protagonist with motivating want and a journey of the hero with change for the better. You rarely see someone actually do it all in a single thought and speech. This was masterfully done. Debbie Lamedman found the right words, the right nuance and the right tone to make this a complete story. Very well done!
It's so hard to put a complete story into just a short monologue. Beginning, middle, end. Protagonist with motivating want and a journey of the hero with change for the better. You rarely see someone actually do it all in a single thought and speech. This was masterfully done. Debbie Lamedman found the right words, the right nuance and the right tone to make this a complete story. Very well done!