The protagonist knows what he wants and he wants it desperately. He is willing to do anything he can to get it. The antagonists need to stop him and they work hard at it. Great conflict, very tight and nice dialogue, terrific characters and a unique situation. Very well written. Brava!
The protagonist knows what he wants and he wants it desperately. He is willing to do anything he can to get it. The antagonists need to stop him and they work hard at it. Great conflict, very tight and nice dialogue, terrific characters and a unique situation. Very well written. Brava!