What a wonderful, fast paced monologue this is, it reads like one giant long sentence and you feel the urgency the protagonist Rollo feels as they describe what was an old restaurant but is now a bar of some kind as he meets an alien, or something like an alien but the MIB guys arrive and now he has to hide for a while.
See what I did there?! A wonderful monologue, love it!
What a wonderful, fast paced monologue this is, it reads like one giant long sentence and you feel the urgency the protagonist Rollo feels as they describe what was an old restaurant but is now a bar of some kind as he meets an alien, or something like an alien but the MIB guys arrive and now he has to hide for a while.
See what I did there?! A wonderful monologue, love it!